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PERFECT HUSBANDS
Almost everyone is complaining about their lives. Some say they aren’t happy and the others say they are restless. Especially married women do this. It’s nonsense! What else do you want besides a husband? They do their best to make you happy.
First of all, they take all the responsibilities of marriage. They work till late hours with heart and soul, and when he comes home he wants to talk to you about anything although he is exhausted. He never watches TV or spends his time on computer. You, together, sit in front of the TV and watch whatever you (the wives) want. It could be a soup opera or a romantic film. He enjoys watching them with you too much.
Second, he avoids asking stupid questions like “ why is this glass here?”. Also, he isn’t interested in other beautiful women. He loves only you, so there is no need to doubt him. Then, when you are angry or sad he immediately tries to make you smile making different kinds of jokes. He listens to your problems all the time.
Third, supposing that you are too bored tos tay home, he takes you for a walk or entertainment in an instant. Afterwards, he never argues with you without understanding or listening to you. Lastly, he aren’t jealous of you unnecessarily.
We, women, don’t know how to be satisfied with our husbands. They are perfect people and we must appreciate them. Please ladies! Do not complain about your husbands any more!
Dear,You must change your style,because we will write in an ironic way like the exampe of "i want a wife "
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