30 Aralık 2010 Perşembe

INCREDIBLE GAME ( MERVE DONMEZ)

Can you imagine that everything is a game which is planned in a detail way as it is in the film whose name is THE GAME.This film is very interesting and comlicated to differ that it is a game or is it is a real. You  will understand that it is an incredible game when you watch the film from the beginning.

There are many evidence to proof that this film is really a game. Firstly, there is a company which prepares games for people as a gift and they prepare these games if a person accepts to play. In this film, Nicolas is a businessman and he is very busy with his job so he don't spend time for fun.His childhood is also really comlicated for him because he sees his father while he is commiting suicide so his psyshclogy is affected badly. This is a one reason why he is so unsocial perseon,also. Anyway, his brother wants to make him happy and to make him observe his environment, to make him related with happier things. His brother wants him to spend time for fun because of his boring life so he gives a card of CRS and the game starts. This is a game because in one scene this company reaches to Nicolas via tv speaker who reports financial news. The man says to nicolas that your game starts. With all these things starts to go bad for nicolas.

The other proof is that this company give clues to  Nicolas only they want him to observe his arround and to be avare of his around with all things. For example they give him a key to use it useful places and then they give him a door handle also. They don't want him to die. they plans so greatly this game that he started to thinks all things who experiences are real.

Finally, we understand tat the end of the film that it is a really game because it is a birthday party. At the last scene Nicolas and also some audience think that this company conceives the nicolas and it wants to kill him, to cheat him and also they think that they want to take all his money so nicolas wants to kill the woman who is in the game but he shoots his gun to his brother and he kill his brother. Then everything gets complicated for Nicolas so he commits a suicide by jumping from the roof of the building as his father but he falls down in a hall which is full of his friends, he doesn't  die because a team waiting him with trampoline. Every caution is thought by CRS.Some audience think that is isn't a game because of risky scenes but at the last part of the film,woman say that every caution are taken for nicolas. She explains that there are divers for any bad stiuation. So this shows that is it a game.

Life is a game as this film shows us because we don't know what will happen in a moment. We should observe our environment and we do eveything in time and we should live whatever we are necessart to live.

3 yorum:

  1. AYŞE BALIN
    Your grammer isn't sufficient in somewhere of the essay.
    Organization is perfect. You gave so much supporting details about your thesis statement. Your essay is an argumentative essay exactly. It is an good example.
    You can add som information and sentence to your concluding paragraph.
    Content is also faultless. There is also a logical organization.

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  2. MERVE,
    I liked your essay a lot.
    organization:your organization is good.
    grammar:there are a few mistakes.'related with happier things' instead of happier , you can use funny.apart from this.there are only written mistakes such as comlicated,psyshclogy,perseon.
    content:you explain everything detaily.
    Evrim ERTAY.

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  3. Duygu
    hi Merve.Your argumantative essay is good.You have definition,organization and support your ideas.Refuting opposing arguments is good.As language,you can use 'Opponents of this idea claim ...' or 'They claim that … since …'.And also,there are a little spelling mistakes like comlicated,eveything,necessart :) You can edit this :)

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