GLOBAL CIRRICULUM
Global cirriculum is a successful process affecting students positively.It refers to an education which is the same for all of the students.It doesn’t matter that their cultures,languages.The most important thing is knowledge.I think global cirriculum is an effective way to teach something to the students and I can prove it for some reasons.
All of the students are contacted with each other even if they are from different countries.They can share with all of the things together at any given moment and so they impover each other.While they are learning their own studies,they can improve their culture.As you know,learning starts with in the childhood and the children get it from their families that’s why the first education begins with families so with cultures.If they don’t know other cultures,they will just have the stereotype education.Global cirriculum helps them to improve themselves.Also,if they learn the same things,this helps them when they go another countires.For example;they will have the same dicipline and so they will know what they will do when they’re go abroad.In addition this,they can communicate with each other easily.Actually,they won’t have any problems to know other people and they can talk about everything which they want to mention about.Some people may claim that global cirriculum isn’t a successful way for an education but it has no bad effect.With it,students add new things their own and they know that all of the students have the same resposibilities with them
I mean,global cirriculum is an effective way while teaching something.Students will have self-confidence and all of the students in the world will have the same things.There will be a unity about education and the world develops easily
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YanıtlaSilintroduction body paragraph and conclusion is very nice especially thesis statement. your essat hasn't to any grammaticial errors;but ı found a word mistake.for example; they improve each other. you said that they impover each other. briefly ı liked it
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YanıtlaSilYour essay is perfect. I found only a few small word mistake but they're not so important because when you check your essay, you can find and correct them, i know.
Organization and content are also perfect. I couldn't find any mistake.
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YanıtlaSilyour introduction is nice and clear.
your body has some problems
They can share with all of the things together at any given moment and so they impover each other.---they can share the some information at the same time,so they can improve each other.this sentnce will be more suitable.
learning starts with in the childhood.with the childhood.
refutation and counter argument are ok
conclusion is clear and supports the thesis statement.
content is good there is unity and coherence.
overall it is effective and good.
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