Have you ever thought if you are in a game, what will you do? Game is a fun activity for people, but game in life is much more different than a fun game. It leads to many problems in people’s life. For example, the movie, ’the game’ , is about a wealthy man’s life. He is in a game by a company called C.R.S.The game is like a real life. If you are watching, you will certainly think it is not a game, all events are real. In the movie, the game leads to psycuhological problems and it threats Nicholas’s life in many scenes. Because of these factors, it is not a game.
Firstly, the game threats Nicholas’s life in many scenes. For example, Nicholas get in taxi. He is relaxed. Then he recognize that the driver’s card is fake.Although he wants to get out of the car, the driver doesn’t stop.While the car is going to the sea, the driver jumps.The taxi falls into the sea.I think it is very risky.Everybody knows people can’t breath in the water.A minute in the water is much more important for people as it affects whether people live or not.Scientists explain a conscious victim can hold his breath in a few minutes.At the begining of drowning , victim tries to breath in a panic way.The victim can consciously hold his/her breath for some time under the water.This occurs in a minute.In the second stage, the level of oxygen in the blood decreases, and the level of carbon dioxide increases.In the third stage, water enters the lungs.In the last stage, the person die.This occurs in five minutes.If Nicholas, the main character of the movie ’the game’, was late for opening the taxi’s window, he would certainly die.Another risky event is when Nicholas jumped onto the floor.When he thought that he killed his brother, he jumped onto the floor.He jumped from a high building.
Secondly, the game led some psycohological illnesses in Nicholas life. He lived many events. For example, one day he woke up as a poor.For a person who is accustomed to live a wealthy life, being poor is very depressing situation.He didn’t have Money, identification or password.In a normal situation, he can becomes mad.The events that he lived was very risky.When he thought that he killed his brother , he could have a heart attack.These events are not psychologically true.If the events were different that was expected, the result would be bad.I think These events have devastating effects on Nicholas psycohology.Psycohogists say sudden events that will affect people’s life probably cause to depression.Poverty and social isolation have an increased risk of depression.Death of a family member is another reason of depression.Nicholas found himself as a poor guy.Then he thought that he killed his brother.We can see the game’s devastating effects.At the end of the movie, he was psychologically tired.
You can also think that as it is only a game,adrenalin must be necessary.That Nicholas has experienced many different kind of event makes his life inordinary.Game is for fun and Nicholas must be fun.These events are not threading ones.Another thing you can think can be psycohological effects of the game.Nicholas has different experiences,due to this, he is surprised.At the end of the movie, he was pyscially tired.However, although game is for fun, they don’t include adrenalin.Game should not affect people’s life.Games are not a part of people’s life.If people want to paly a game,they play for fun.Games are not serious actions and they are not threading activities.As for psycohological effects, the game should not have devastating effects.Games should not affect people’s psycohology.At the end of the movie, it is clear that Nicholas is psycohologically tired.If he is phscially tired, he can forget about all events that he lived, he can be happy and relaxed.
Finally , I certainly believe that it is not a game.Games aim to make afun, but in the movie, I can’t see anything funny.In the movie, there is a man who is always in trouble and wants to escape from all things, but he can’t escape.He has to deal with the difficulties.It affects his psycohology and life negatively.
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YanıtlaSilYour essay is longer than any others. But in your essay, there are some unnecessary sentences. They're not related with the film. Anyway, I see that you strived. I want to write some good and some bad comments. There are some word deficiency and stuructural deficiency. For example; psycuhological, he can becomes mad, paly. You should correct them. Your organization is good. As I wrote, there are some sentences that aren't related with the essay. You gave some scientific evidents. But I think, if they aren't, your essay can be more fautless. Coherence is also handled. I see that you exerted effort.
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YanıtlaSilGrammer: There are some grammer mistakes.=>"Nicholas get in taxi","he recognize ","he can becomes ", You should choose a different verb in this sentence =>"must be fun"
YanıtlaSilApart from these, grammer is used correctly.Some sentences can be longer instead of short ones.
Organization: It is OK. You have three main parts and thesis statement is OK.Body paragraphs can persuade the readers easily due to the some facts you have used.There should be counter argument and refutation in your essay.
Content: There is a unity.It is OK.You support your ideas with some examples in the film.
l like your essay . Good job. Thanks
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