Evrim ERTAY/THREE KINDS OF POLLUTION(classification)

People in the world have struggled with many problems since the recorded time.The people in the world have to endevaour with these problems.These problems have some bad results such as contagious disease, extinction of some animal species.In addition to these results,we don't have fresh air in the world and what are the reasons for them?Environmental pollution is one of the reasons that cause people to get affected badly.It includes air pollution, water pollution and soil pollution.
     The first kind of pollution is soil pollution and this kind of pollution is caused by fertilizers and insecticides.Why are we using fertilizer and insecticides?The answer is simple :we have crowded population and the amount of population increases day by day.The swelling population of the world makes us use fertilizers and insecticides.In addition to good aspects,they are the main things that give rise to pollution.Fertilizer spread over farmlands and reach into rivers by rain .This kills alot of fish in the water .Insecticides are one of two kinds and one kind can protect its toxic in the soil for years and the danger arises from the poison.
     The other kind of pollution is water pollution.Our waters are affected badly.Why are our waters dirty now?Because men have used the water as a dumping ground for waste products.You can think that the water is large and they can include lots of waste products,but this is completely wrong.Water's capacity is not unlimited.For example, in Baltic sea,there is no oxygen due to the fact that it is polluted seriously.The other example is coastal areas around Britain. these areas are polluted by the discharge of tank washing by ships and industries also polute these areas.They dispose of unwanted waste.In order to dispose cheaply, they use these places.
     The third kind of pollution is air pollution.Industries are one of the most important reason of air pollution.The first reason why it is the most important is that they cover much land.Because of this,we have less fresh air.By industries,some harmful products expose.For example,2 million ton of smoke,5 million tons of sulphur gas and 1.5 million tons of grit and ash expose.By this exposure,rainfall over Europe has become more acid in recent years and this acid affects the growth of trees in Scandinavia.These are not complete.There are even worse than these.The amount of carbon dioxide can increase in the atmosphere due to burning oil and coal and this may lead to a rise in Earth's temperature.Rising temperature may lead to melt the ice-caps and arise in the level of the ocean.
     Actually , the most effective reason of pollution is people and people have to struggled with these problems.There are three kind of pollution such as air ,water and soil pollution and we have to prevent these problems.We polute air, water and soil and if we don't have any prevention to these problems,lots of living creature will die

GLOBAL CIRRICULUM/SEDA DURUYOL

                                    GLOBAL CIRRICULUM

Global cirriculum is a successful process affecting students positively.It refers to an education which is the same for all of the students.It doesn’t matter that their cultures,languages.The most important thing is knowledge.I think global cirriculum is an effective way to teach something to the students and I can prove it for some reasons.

All of the students are contacted with each other even if they are from different countries.They can share with  all of the things together at any given moment and so they impover each other.While they are learning their own studies,they can improve their culture.As you know,learning starts with in the childhood and the children get it from their families that’s why the first education begins with families so with cultures.If they don’t know other cultures,they will just have the stereotype education.Global cirriculum helps them to improve themselves.Also,if they learn the same things,this helps them when they go another countires.For example;they will have the same dicipline and so they will know what they will do when they’re go abroad.In addition this,they can communicate with each other easily.Actually,they won’t have any problems to know other people and they can talk about everything which they want to mention about.Some people may claim that global cirriculum isn’t a successful way for an education but it has no bad effect.With it,students add new things their own and they know that all of the students have the same resposibilities with them

  I mean,global cirriculum is an effective way while teaching something.Students will have self-confidence and all of the students in the world will have the same things.There will be a unity about education and the world develops easily

INCREDIBLE GAME ( MERVE DONMEZ)

Can you imagine that everything is a game which is planned in a detail way as it is in the film whose name is THE GAME.This film is very interesting and comlicated to differ that it is a game or is it is a real. You  will understand that it is an incredible game when you watch the film from the beginning.

There are many evidence to proof that this film is really a game. Firstly, there is a company which prepares games for people as a gift and they prepare these games if a person accepts to play. In this film, Nicolas is a businessman and he is very busy with his job so he don't spend time for fun.His childhood is also really comlicated for him because he sees his father while he is commiting suicide so his psyshclogy is affected badly. This is a one reason why he is so unsocial perseon,also. Anyway, his brother wants to make him happy and to make him observe his environment, to make him related with happier things. His brother wants him to spend time for fun because of his boring life so he gives a card of CRS and the game starts. This is a game because in one scene this company reaches to Nicolas via tv speaker who reports financial news. The man says to nicolas that your game starts. With all these things starts to go bad for nicolas.

The other proof is that this company give clues to  Nicolas only they want him to observe his arround and to be avare of his around with all things. For example they give him a key to use it useful places and then they give him a door handle also. They don't want him to die. they plans so greatly this game that he started to thinks all things who experiences are real.

Finally, we understand tat the end of the film that it is a really game because it is a birthday party. At the last scene Nicolas and also some audience think that this company conceives the nicolas and it wants to kill him, to cheat him and also they think that they want to take all his money so nicolas wants to kill the woman who is in the game but he shoots his gun to his brother and he kill his brother. Then everything gets complicated for Nicolas so he commits a suicide by jumping from the roof of the building as his father but he falls down in a hall which is full of his friends, he doesn't  die because a team waiting him with trampoline. Every caution is thought by CRS.Some audience think that is isn't a game because of risky scenes but at the last part of the film,woman say that every caution are taken for nicolas. She explains that there are divers for any bad stiuation. So this shows that is it a game.

Life is a game as this film shows us because we don't know what will happen in a moment. We should observe our environment and we do eveything in time and we should live whatever we are necessart to live.

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CLASSIFICATION ESSAY/SEDA DURUYOL

THE TYPES OF FRIENDS

How can you choose your friends?What are your criteria?What proporties do they have ?Actually,they must be similar to you.While choosing your friend,you think that he will be with you forever so you must be careful about their characters.Friends are classified supporter,helpful and empathetic.

The first friend type is supporter.They know you well and they know your opinions and support you.They defend you everywhere even if you are not there.They praise you.Actually,they try to make you happy.They always agree with you and you feel better while being togehter her.For example,when you discuss someone who are opposed to you,your supporter friend comes and encourges you.You don't have to give up your opinions.They really love and don't disoppoint you.

The second and the most important friends are helpful.They help you with all subjects.They motivate you when you want to learn something.They help you while you're growing up.They improve your character and teach you "true and false" . They want you to be succesfull and never envy you.Think about your last mistake.He was honest and said that you had been wrong.It is clear that they want you not to be sad,they just hope for your happinees.

The third type of friends is empathetic friends.When you feel bad,at first,you need them.Because you think that they will say good thing you feel relax.They don't care about your faulties.Whatever you do,they will be with you..You can call them when you're happy or sad.If you call them just the time when you feel bad,they can escape from you and in the result,both of you are upset.That is to say, the are fragile,too.You must be careful to them ,conversely you can be more upset without them

All of us need friends even if we have a good family,darling , husband,wife.We always want to share our thoughts with another person who is like us.Any friendship don't build for benefit or advantages.It must be strong.The moment when you find a real friend,don't let him/her go and don't forget these types of friends.You must know them as much as they know you....

AYŞEN ERASLAN(CLASSIFICATION ESSAY)

               HOW CAN WE PLAN OUR VACATIONS
     Planning a vacation can be exciting but sometimes it is hard to decide where to go.Should I spend my vacatıon at the beach or go a camping?While many rich people travelling the globe,some people plan a trip to a special place according to their interest and budget.There are three options which can be choosen.
    The first one is cultural vacation.Usually,this is a place you have never been before such as historical cities,museums..A vacatıon like this make you more knowledgeable
and it can give a new perspective in life.You may have an opportunity to visit different places and meet new people.
    The second and the most enjoyable type for your special vacation is nature and resorts vacation.It is a perfect vacation because all of your plans are arranged only for fun.It is suitable for busy people who are under great deal of pressure.Sunbathing,swimming,fishing and biking around the forest are the perfect ways to remove yourself from the daily problems.
    The last one is thermal vacation.It has been becoming popular day by day due to effective advertisements.It is suitable for people who suffer from various illnesses.With their rich minerals thermal waters help you to recover from your illnesses and make you relax.If you are travelling by yourself the most suitable one is travel packages.You can choose tour groups which arrange every detail for you.
    In short,while planning a vacation you can benefit from many alternatives,but we should keep in mind that our interest and budget are the most effective factors .

AYŞEN ERASLAN(ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY ABOUT FILM)

                        IS IT A GAME OR NOT?

      What will you do when you find yourself in a terrible game? We know games are funny activities for the purpose of entertainment,but in the film”The Game,we encountered lots of strange situations.In my opinion,it is not a game,it is a dream or hallucination.

    In the film there is a man whose brother gives him a present and his life starts to change.The things which he experiences are so realistic that at first I thought it describes the man’s real experiences,but later towards the end of the film I understood it is not a game.There are some reasons why it is not a game.

    First of all,the man encounters extremely risky situations.For example,in the taxi man flows into the sea or he jumps onto the floor from a high building like his father suicide,but he isn’t injured.I think they aren’t logical.

    Another reason is many strange events happen constantly.Someone breaks into man’s house and writes nonsense things to the walls and dissappears.Later,the whole house is searched,but there isn’t any evidence to show it was real.Apart from it,he shoots his brother but he does not die.Some people say that it is a real game,but I think it is not a real game because Nicholas sees strange things in his dreams which result from his bad childhood experience.

    In conclusion,Nicholas who is the main character of the film sees  dreams or hallucinations.When he is a child his father commits suicide.This event affects him so much that he experiences some psychological problems and starts to see hallucinations or nigthmares.Because of these reasons it is not a game.

AYŞEN ERASLAN(ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY)

                          GLOBAL EDUCATION

      Education has been a serious concern for all countries in the world.From past to present various education systems have been tested in order to find the most effective and suitable one.I believe that the education system of the future will include a global curriculum and a worldwide qualifications system.

     Technological advances have transformed our world into a small village.Thanks to it,we can easily communicate with other parts of the world.Gradually,education system has been also affected by this rapid change.

      Due to globalization and technology,appling the same education system for all country will be much easier.With the spread of Internet-supported education,every student will be able to acsess the same curriculum topics.

     Students will receive equal education which will contribute to the development of the whole world.However,some claim that every country has its own politic,culturel and socio-economic structure,so global education will not be as effective as it looks.On the other hand,some believe that with the help of technology woldwide qualification systeem and global curriculum will be easier and more effective for students.

     In conclusion,in the future the same  education system will be all over the world by providing quick and efficient education.All students will benefit from global education whereever they are.

AYŞEN ERASLAN(CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY)

WHAT CAN WE DO?

Have you ever stayed stuck in a terrible traffic?If so,you can understand what people feel when they have to reach a place immediately.My hometown,Ankara, is a perfect place with its social activities,parks and shopping centers,but recently it has been experiencing a serious transportation problem.Then,what are the factors that cause the problem of transportation in Ankara?There are three main reasons which make this problem worse and worse.

The first reason,I think the most important one,People prefer to use private cars instead of using public transportation.People migrate to ankara,which is the second developed city of Turkey to take advantage of job oppurtunity.This means that there are too many cars whose number is almost equal to the number of people.As a result,transportation problem is increasing day by day.

Another reason is improper parking.People park their cars on the streets due to excessive parking fees.This leads to traffic jam in the mornings and evenings when everybody tries to reach his/her work,school or house.Improper parking narrows roads,so cars and buses have to slow down in order to give way to the another car.

The last reason is lack of underground lines and buses.People living in Ankara have been suffering from this problem every day.people who are lucky to get on a bus generally stay without seat.when they arrive their work or school,they have already got tired due to standing for hours.This causes concentration disorders and inefficiency.

To summarize,Ankara is a developed and modern city except for its transportation problem.If you want to live in Ankara,you shouldn't ignore this problem.We can help reduce this problem using public transportation instead of private cars.this solution not only contributes to reducing traffic jam,it also contributes to reducing air pollution.

EVRİM ERTAY-CONVENTİONAL MEDİCİNE DOESN'T HELP CANCER PATİENTS

Nonconventional medicine is the way that people use to improve their health, but people don't know if their treatment works or not.I think it is sometimes a good treatment for people's health.For example , if you catch a cold , there are lots of way to feel better without any pills or any kind of medication;however, it can be seen as a wrong treatment by some people.When we examine most of cancer patients or some pills that affect people's health badly or some kind of alternative therapies, we can understand nonconventional medicine make us feel better than the other kind.
There are three important event that we can understand nonconventional medicine's positive effect.I think the most important one is cancer treatments.Everybody know cancer is a fatal disease, but we can't say all cancer patients will die.This disease requires some treatments such as chemotheraphy, radiotherapy and surgery.Many cancer patients have these treatment,but %96 of all cancer patients die.Is this a successful treatment for cancer?The other thing I can say is pills.Some pills are bad effect on our body.They can even be fatal.For example,some pills have strong effect on heart and people who take the pills can die of heart attack.At the same time, they can destroy people's kidney.The last one is nonconventional medicine for high blood pressure.High blood pressure can develop without signs or symptoms and exist for years;however,unknown high blood pressure can result in serious health risk such as heart attack,so alternative therapies such as acupuncture, yoga can help.
Nonconventional medicine , also known as alternative medicine , can help us feel better.Why is it effectice?The answer is simple: people know what they can do for their health, that is they can know the best treatment.Because of this , their treatment will be successful.I think alternative medicine is the best way to feel better if your illness is not more serious.

EVRİM ERTAY-GAME IS A FUNNY ACTIVITY

Have you ever thought if you are in a game, what will you do? Game is a fun activity for people, but game in life is much more different than a fun game. It leads to many problems in people’s life. For example, the movie, ’the game’ , is about a wealthy man’s life. He is in a game by a company called C.R.S.The game is like a real life. If you are watching, you will certainly think it is not a game,  all events are real. In the movie, the game leads to psycuhological problems and it threats Nicholas’s life in many scenes. Because of these factors, it is not a game.

     Firstly, the game threats Nicholas’s life in many scenes. For example, Nicholas get in taxi. He is relaxed. Then he recognize that the driver’s card is fake.Although he wants to get out of the car, the driver doesn’t stop.While the car is going to the sea, the driver jumps.The taxi  falls into the sea.I think it is very risky.Everybody knows people can’t breath in the water.A minute in the water is much more important for people as it affects whether people live or not.Scientists  explain a conscious victim can hold his breath in a few minutes.At the begining of drowning , victim tries to breath in a panic way.The victim can consciously hold his/her breath for some time under  the water.This occurs in a minute.In the second stage, the level of oxygen in the blood decreases, and the level of carbon dioxide increases.In the third stage, water enters the lungs.In the last stage, the person die.This occurs in five minutes.If Nicholas, the main character of the movie ’the game’, was late for opening the taxi’s window, he would certainly die.Another risky event is when Nicholas jumped onto the floor.When he thought that he killed his brother, he jumped onto the floor.He jumped from a high building.

     Secondly, the game led some psycohological illnesses in Nicholas life. He lived many events. For example, one day  he woke up as a poor.For a person who is accustomed to live a wealthy life, being poor is very depressing situation.He didn’t have Money, identification or password.In a normal situation, he can becomes mad.The events that he lived was very risky.When he thought that he killed his brother , he could have a heart attack.These events are not psychologically true.If the events were different that was expected, the result would be bad.I think These events have devastating effects on Nicholas psycohology.Psycohogists say sudden events that will affect people’s life probably cause to depression.Poverty and social  isolation have an increased risk of depression.Death of a family member is another reason of depression.Nicholas found himself as a poor guy.Then he thought that he killed his brother.We can see the game’s devastating effects.At the end of the movie, he was psychologically tired.

    You can also think that as it is only a game,adrenalin must be necessary.That Nicholas has experienced  many different kind of event makes his life inordinary.Game is for fun and Nicholas must be fun.These events are not threading ones.Another thing you can think can be psycohological effects of the game.Nicholas has different experiences,due to this, he is surprised.At the end of the movie, he was pyscially tired.However, although game is for fun, they don’t include adrenalin.Game should not affect people’s life.Games are not a part of people’s life.If people want to paly a game,they play for fun.Games are not serious actions and they are not threading activities.As for psycohological effects, the game should not have devastating effects.Games should not affect people’s psycohology.At the end of the movie, it is clear that Nicholas is psycohologically tired.If he is phscially tired, he can forget about all events that he lived, he can be happy and relaxed.

        Finally , I certainly believe that it is not a game.Games aim to make afun, but in the movie, I can’t see anything funny.In the movie, there is a man who is always in trouble and wants to escape from all things, but he can’t escape.He has to deal with the difficulties.It affects his psycohology and life negatively.

                                                                                                              

                                                                                                      

Yazgı ÇELİK/ ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

A GAME AS A GIFT

            People gives different kinds of presents to their relatives. Some people want an extraordinary one, beacuse this on emay change the life of the man who had the gift. Here, we saw this kind of a present given by the hero’s brother, Conrad, in this movie. He gave a game as a gift. Is it interesting, isn’t it? It is likely that there are some to be saying that it is nonsense or unreal. However, believe me – because i don’t lie – it is a real game.

            Think about it. Suppose that you were Nicholas: You were an important business man; you have a lot of money and have everything you want. What is gave to you as a present? What can you give a present to a man who has everything? Of course a gift like Conrad thouhgt, also everybody Nicholas knows is in the game. He has accidents, escapes from the cabs, is watched by some… Everything is so planned that it is hard to believe it, but if it weren’t a game, Nicholas would definitely be died. For example, the taxi driver locks him in the car and let it drop into the water. If you remember, you will notice that those people gave him a doorhandle before. And what did he do? Yes, he used the doorhandle to open the door of the car and he was able to get out of the car.

            If I need some extra examples to prove that it is a real game, I can give the “key” example. He used it to run the elevator, didn’t he? It worked and he went up to the 14th floor with the blonde woman who included in the game. The happenings went on. The woman and the others were so successfull that Nicholas never understood they were lying. Even his ex wife is in the game. I appreciate that Conrad had thouhgt all people Nicholas knew and he was able to arrenge them successfully.

            There was an aim of this game, of course. Nicholas had lost his father many many years ago and he became a stubborn person. The aim was to make him understand the important of life. Conrad did this finally. At the end of the film, everyone was in the hall to celebrate Nicholas’ birthday. If it weren’t a game, nobody would be there. I liked this film too much. It is really an excellent game, but just a game.

SEDA DURUYOL / I WANT A HUSBAND

                                     THE HUSBAND LOOKED FOR

      Am I sure that I will get married someday? Of course,I will be married  and also with a perfect man.Actually saying that a perfect man can be seem a dream but I belive in him.I believe my dreams.We will have a happily after.Everyting will be perfect.I will find the man who is unique.I will have the man who is looking for by every ladies.That’s that! Here the man…

       I want a husband who really feel me in his inside.He loves me more than himself.I want a husband saying always “yes”.He never argues with me and he does whatever I want.He never thinks,he only does everything.I want a husband who takes  care of  me.when I feel bad,he makes me feel better.There won’t be anytime when I feel bad with him.I want a husband who does not smoke and he helps me to quit it.I want a husband who has so much money.He will buy whatever I want and  also we always go another cities,countries.I want a husband who is a good father.He will take care of our children.I want a husband who doesn’t talk so much.I want a husband who likes to listen to me.It doesn’t matter how much I talk.He always listens me.I want a husband who pays attention our house.there won’t be any lack in our house.I want a husband who makes surprise.The surprises must be so many that I should be bored.I want a husband who doesn’t shut me but when I shut him he should not say a word.I want husband who doesn’t makes me sad.If he makes,he can know to apoligese.He should be aware of his mistakes.I want a husband who is careful about my needs in emotions.sometimes he can understand me without talking to me.When he sees my face,he will get my mood and he should find a solution immediately.

        I want husband,I want husband...All ladies want not just husband,they want the perfect one.I will find,may be I have already had him…Time passes quickly and I will have been married unique husband after five years.

Ideal Husband

Yazgı ÇELİK

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PERFECT HUSBANDS

Almost everyone is complaining about their lives. Some say they aren’t happy and the others say they are restless. Especially married women do this. It’s nonsense! What else do you want besides a husband? They do their best to make you happy.

First of all, they take all the responsibilities of marriage. They work till late hours with heart and soul, and when he comes home he wants to talk to you about anything although he is exhausted. He never watches TV or spends his time on computer. You, together, sit in front of the TV and watch whatever you (the wives) want. It could be a soup opera or a romantic film. He enjoys watching them with you too much.

Second, he avoids asking stupid questions like “ why is this glass here?”. Also, he isn’t interested in other beautiful women. He loves only you, so there is no need to doubt him. Then, when you are angry or sad he immediately tries to make you smile making different kinds of jokes. He listens to your problems all the time.

Third, supposing that you are too bored tos tay home, he takes you for a walk or entertainment in an instant. Afterwards, he never argues with you without understanding or listening to you. Lastly, he aren’t jealous of you unnecessarily.

We, women, don’t know how to be satisfied with our husbands. They are perfect people and we must appreciate them. Please ladies! Do not complain about your husbands any more!

SEDA DURUYOL /ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

                                                         LIKE A GAME

        What would be your answer if someone wanted to play a game ? You will not know anything about it.They will just tkae your information and they will start.It sounds interesting,isn’t it ? there is a film about a game which is like it.There is a man whose brother gave him a present.The present is a game for fun.Actually,it is not a game,it can’t be. It must be a dream or psychological problem

       The first reason is it was so dangerous.He had really hard times while playing.He always was close to be died.For example; while driving,the car fell into the sea and all the doors are locked.He had a key which they had given but he didn’t know where he would use it.He could think at that moment but if he couldn’t remember this,he might be died.If it had been a game,the death wouldn’t have used as a part of it.All of the people played with him were in the game because they wanted to give present for him birtday.It is not logical to use death.

       Another reason is there are many poverties in the game.Evidences were never found,someone broke his house and wrote many things to the walls,but then they were suddenly disappeared.The whole house was searching but they couldn’t find any gun.However,in the last part he had a gun.He shot his brother.Someone says that it was just game,the leads were not real but noone had known the gun.How were the leads changed? He had just seen a dream.Bacause he didn’t want to loose his brother,he saw it like this.

       All of it is a consideration in his mind because he would celebrate his new age.He had nothing,there would be noone who paid attention for him.Also,his father killed himself at the same age.He had psychological problems and had a dream.Any person who takes care of another person doesn’t put in danger him.I completely disagree that it was a game!not a game,it was a dream