4 Ocak 2011 Salı

What a big game ! - ender demirci


WHAT A BIG GAME !

            If you come across a game like this, what will your reaction be? They learn all about you and game begins. There is a man who is chosen as victim fort his game. Furthermore, he is chosen in his birthday by his Brother. His Brother gave him a fun game card and when he called, the big game started.
            the first reason is the game was established an amazigly effective story. Events followed each other so logically. So many special people was there fort his game. They played so well. Even if his old waitress in his house.
            Second reason is he had so much difficulties and there were so realistic, all of them was edited professionally. They seemed almost kill him but no. For example, before his cab sank, a window knob had been given to him and cab had a special design. When somebody entered Christine’s house and fired, they did not use bullet, they were fake.
            As a result, all the events he experianced was a game, because if it was real, they could easily kill him. I think the only thing that he must understand is the importance of life, because his father died in his ages and he chose the same way.

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  1. Hi Ender
    Firstly i want to say that there are some gramatical mistakes in your essay.You need to fix them.Organisation is good but in my opinion you can write more sentences in body paragraphs.You need to improve your body paragraphs.Content is good.there is no problem in your essay's content.Well done!
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