OBSTACLES WHİCH ARE OVERCOMED
Obstacles are around of us in our life.We encounter with too many obstacles everyday or we encounter with people who have lots of obstacles which are very difficult to endure.In those two films we have watched there are people,main characters,who deal with undurable obstacles.Helen Keller is blind and deaf in The Miracle Worker while Frank is struggling with poverty in Angela's Ashes.Their obstacles are different from eachother's,but;they are ambitious in order to overcome their obstacles.When I compared those films,I found The Miracle Worker more impressive than Angela's Ashes.In Angela's Ashes,Frank deals with poverty,misery and tormented life,but;I think at that time there may be lots of families just like them even if this is a real that Frank is strong to overcome his problems compared with the others.However;I think, Helen Keller achives that thing which is impossible.She is blind and deaf,but;she overcome this obstacles with the help of her parents and especially with the help of her teacher.At first,she is wild and she learns alphabet of hand and at the end of film she is really calm and also she is able to speak a bit.This is really extraordinary situation because she is deaf.How can be a person who can't hear any voice,but speak?I think this achivement is more impressing one comparing with Frank's achivement.As a result in these two films, main characters overcome their obstacles in spite of difficulties.They both yearn for dealing with them thanks to their ambition,willing and patience
Obstacles are around of us in our life.We encounter with too many obstacles everyday or we encounter with people who have lots of obstacles which are very difficult to endure.In those two films we have watched there are people,main characters,who deal with undurable obstacles.Helen Keller is blind and deaf in The Miracle Worker while Frank is struggling with poverty in Angela's Ashes.Their obstacles are different from eachother's,but;they are ambitious in order to overcome their obstacles.When I compared those films,I found The Miracle Worker more impressive than Angela's Ashes.In Angela's Ashes,Frank deals with poverty,misery and tormented life,but;I think at that time there may be lots of families just like them even if this is a real that Frank is strong to overcome his problems compared with the others.However;I think, Helen Keller achives that thing which is impossible.She is blind and deaf,but;she overcome this obstacles with the help of her parents and especially with the help of her teacher.At first,she is wild and she learns alphabet of hand and at the end of film she is really calm and also she is able to speak a bit.This is really extraordinary situation because she is deaf.How can be a person who can't hear any voice,but speak?I think this achivement is more impressing one comparing with Frank's achivement.As a result in these two films, main characters overcome their obstacles in spite of difficulties.They both yearn for dealing with them thanks to their ambition,willing and patience
AYŞE BALIN
YanıtlaSilLanguage is correct in your essay. There isn't any organization. Namely, you haven't 3 paragraph in your essay. You wrote your essay as if it was an paragraph but it shouldn't be a paragraph. I didn't attend class at the beginning of the years, so I knew that it would be an essay. If I wrong, tell me friend. That's all.
it is a paragraph of the comparing two films. on first days we wrote it, the teacher wanted us to write a short paragraph about these two films. it is a compare and contrast paragraph.
YanıtlaSilAYŞE BALIN
YanıtlaSilThank you for your explanation. I didn't know. You know that I was absent on first days. Then, your paragraph is perfect :)