2 Ocak 2011 Pazar

CLASSIFICATION ESSAY (MERVE DÖNMEZ)

                                        SPEAKING AND WRITING

       Expressing ourselves differs from every person to person. We express ourselves how we feel well, so it changes from a person to person. some of us  like to speak while some like to write to express our feeling in an effective way, so there are two basic styles to express our thoughts, feelings in an effective way.

       First one is speaking which we use mostly to express ourselves because there is an eye contact with the person to whom we are talking. Eye contact is the most important thing while you are talking to someone because you want her to listen to you, so you can understand if she is listening to you or not by looking at her eyes. A person who concentrares on listening to you looks your eyes to make feel her listening. On the other hand, we express ourselves with our gestures while speaking to someone. We can use our gestures to make speaking more effective and to make people listen to us carefully, so speaking is an effective way of expressing ourselves.

      The other one and also the last one is writing to express ourselves effectively. By writing, people explain the things which they can not say by speaking. Writing is different and it has its own nature. Sometimes writing helps us feel ourselves more relax and more relieved. There are some people who can not express themselves by speaking, and so they choose writing to express, to explain themselves and their thoughts. They use more effective words and structure by writing, for example; they can use idioms, more adjective for only one word, and also they can use inverted sentences to make inversion instead of intonation which we use for speaking to make emphasize, so writing is also an effective way to express our thoughts and feelings.

      Both writing and speaking are related with eachother, so they can not be seperated from eachother. The only thing is that one of them can mostly be used by a person. This changes from to person to person. Both of them are effective way for people to express themselves.

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  2. hi merve:)
    organization:the organization of your essay is good.There are a introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion.In introduction, there are a hook and thesis statement.
    Grammar:there are a few mistakes and there are long sentences. for example,I couldn't understand this sentence 'A person who concentrares on listening to you looks your eyes to make feel her listening.'I think in this sentence, there is a mistake.'to you' is unneccessary.
    content:there is a unity.you classify speaking and writing clearly.
    thanks.EVRİM ERTAY

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  3. AYŞE BALIN
    Your language is almost good. But there is a problem in terms of structure. You used some long sentences. Unity is good. Your classification essay is faultless except from a few small mistakes.

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  4. Hi Merve.Your classification essay is good.I see gramatical mistake.But Evrim said that.Maybe,you can classify the more things.Your essay is without any problems.You don2t need to edit . :)

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