UNUSUAL TREATMENT
Do you believe if someone come to you and say you will recover while you are laughing? I think you said him “he was kidding”, but in my opinion laughing can be a solution for some health problems. Most people may know Norman Cousins.he laughed himself all the time. He was so ill and he would die soon. However, he didn’t accept this result and made some researches about that illness. As a result he found an important detail. His mood is so effective for his health. Then, he thought and found his own solution: laughing! I think that was the right choice. Laughing might be helpful for his health.
Laughter is so beneficial for our body. For exanple, it regulates anger, depression anxiety, tension and stress. We know when we get sick or ill we need pshychological or medical support. In these conditions laughing may again be a solution for us. We need to happy, because we are already in a bad mood. Then, if we talk about medicine addicts, they think the only solution is medicines. I think it is completely wrong thought. Sometimes we need medicines, but not everytime. People must understand it. Then, people have to learn to look life in a laughter way.
To sum up, Norman’s story must think us about laughter’s importance. To feel better, to ignore some badness always laugh!
Hi Ender,
YanıtlaSilYour introduction is too Long and your conclusion is too short.Maybe you need more paragraph to enrich your essay and you need to use more argumentative sentences.I think it will make your essay effective.There are some gramatical mistakes which i saw.Content is goodIn fact generally all contents are good.Anyway nice essay but you need add some sentences to make your essay longer.
Mehmet Aktaş